Thursday, November 19, 2009

With this stupid pen you gave me.

I’m still writing with
this stupid pen you gave me.
It says “Boston”
It cost $3.99.

(You didn’t even bother to take off the price tag.)

I’ve never been to Boston
and this pen barely writes
but I keep pushing it harder
on the page
hoping it will come out right.

You seem to not know me at all
sometimes
but then you do this:
Give me this silly present
maybe the meaning was lost on you
but the pen is perfect
in all its imperfections

and I’ve never been to Boston
but the pen is perfect
in all its imperfections

and this pen barely writes
but I’m still touched by the stupid, silly sincerity
and insincerity of it all

Even if the meaning is lost.
Even if you don’t know me at all.

I’ll keep writing.
You ran out the door
before I could say anything at all.

4 comments:

  1. MAYBE! 2 am poetry slams!

    what do you think?

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  2. Haha...didn't see the post time. Either way, I think it's a great idea. You could mix it up...sometimes your own, sometimes writers you like. Sort of like TNC's "because it's friday" feature that he discontinued when his commenters couldn't play nice. I'm sure we won't have that problem around these parts...or will we, Beth?

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  3. Ohhhh I smell a throwdown.

    All I have to say to you Mr. Jay is that you should read "Edwin Drood." I've heard it said that you are a Dickens fan, and personally of the little I've read/seen, this is my favorite. It's his last (so I'm told). How is THAT for nice? :)

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